deren, the outlaw

[deren]

deren, ran he had to, or, ofcourse he could be strung up in the torture gallery, run, he urged himself, he hurtled through a woods, a sickening feel in his stomach, i'm gonna die, he thought, run, he could hear footsteps, closer, closer, faster, faster, he redoubled his pace of the millionth time, when he felt somthing extremeily hard hit his head, he slumped down, and collapsed.

LATER

it had been a long time since deren had seen light, or atleast, sunlight, he had seen gleaming hot pokers he was a prisoner, for heaven knows how long, his torturers sniggered as they whipped and bullied him, he screamed, they laughed. till one odd day, they let him down, he fell to the ground, with a sound jolt. he felt his chains way him down, he hadn't enough strenght to move.

[Thadius]

"Get up, get up!" Thadius said. "Are you okay?"

[deren]

deren looked up at thad, "sir, who are you? i am not ok, i have been under the sentance of prison for 2 years now"

[Thadius]

"Oh what happoned to you?" He said. "The names Thad"

[deren]

"i am an outlaw, they caught me..." panted deren

[Thadius]

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"That is horrible!" Thad said very concered. "What did you do? And can I help? I always try to help those in need." Thad was a rat with Red peircing eyes and jet black fur. His fur was long and ragged. It loked as if he had been through many rough times. And he had...

[Woody the warrior squrriel]

Woody the warrior squrreil walks into the Woods. Woody stops because he hears talking. Woody climbs up into the tree as fast as he can and listens. Woody takes a look at the two creature one of them was a rat the other was some sort of fox or wolf woody was not sure.

[Thadius]

Thadius felt a presence that he had not felt before. But he could not feel exactly were it was so he looked around he saw a squirel hiding in a tree.

"Come down here you have no need to hide." Thadius called to the creature. Although he could kind of see why the animal would be frightened. A rat and and fox/wolf would be scary to be in the presence of.